Using the structure of this poem for writing inspiration today.
I come from a tree lined street with once modest homes
which we left each morning to walk to school or play
in the woods that seemed vast but weren’t.
I come from parents who chose me from
a convent where the nuns called me Mary Ellen and my hair was strawberry blonde and wavy, or so my parents say.
I come from years abroad and dinners at home,
from as many new experiences as my mother could squeeze in
and a simple cottage on the rocky New England coast
to which we still return every summer.
I come from questions and statements,
from a father who didn’t have one of his own but somehow knew
how to be his daughter’s quiet hero.
I come from books and nooks where curling up with a story
and finding quiet is necessary.
I come from curtseys and tradition and
a mother who taught me that being naughty is just fine sometimes.
I come from gardeners and northerners
from stories repeated and shared
from feisty, fiercely independent grandmothers and a grandfather I never met
from happy tears
and heart break and healing.
I come from a place where
an open mind, a gentle heart, and faith,
-Heart
-Soul
-Mind
matter most.
This poem is beautiful! I feel like I know so much about you and have so many questions at the same time. Reading it makes me want to to try to write my own so that I can reflect and dwell on where I come from.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Lisa,
This is simply gorgeous. I decided to respond to “new, old, looking for a pattern to copy and just because” – and I like this pattern. Thanks so much . . . “I come from”
LikeLiked by 1 person
So good, makes me want to know more of the story.
LikeLiked by 1 person
I love your poem. I’m from New England too and I can picture those rocky shores. My son wrote a poem like this when he was in middle school. I love this format.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Oh, how I love your poem. My favorite line is “I come from a father who didn’t have one of his own, but somehow knew how to be his daughter’s quiet hero.” I found myself smiling as I finished reading your poem.
LikeLiked by 1 person
I loved this poem, it flowed beautifully and the imagery was amazing
LikeLiked by 1 person
This poem format is very similar to one I have done with my students. Thank you for sharing. It reminded me that I need to do that with them. It is such a powerful one!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Simply beautiful. Line after line. I’m inspired to mimic your style.
LikeLiked by 1 person