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They don’t care that there is snow in the forecast
They’re too busy pecking the still hard ground, looking for food,
their rusty red breasts a welcome pop of color on the brown hill
They don’t realize it’s still winter
They’re too busy pushing vibrant green shoots towards the sky
And pondering when to release the center stalk and tender bud
up into the cold wind
They don’t understand there is still ice at the edges of creeks and roadside puddles
They’re too busy warming up the air with their annual hum from the ponds and forests
They don’t think about lions and lambs
when they come to school with bare knees and light jackets
hoping for a soft breeze and warming light at recess time
Or maybe they do
Maybe they remember
and know
that winter is lingering,
leaving it’s final marks
Maybe they remember
and
Maybe they’re nudging us to remember too
That longer days, and later sunsets, and hillsides flush with greens and pink and yellow
are coming soon.
Beautiful! Hoping that spring arrives soon to satisfy the peaking and to reward the perseverance.
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Oh, beautiful piece! I think they DO know! (Or at least I'm hoping!)
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I hope you are right – we are certainly ready for it!
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I hope you are right – we are certainly ready for it!
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Please let it be so, I am ready for green and warm. Great structure and repetition!
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Your slice makes me yearn for an early spring. Yesterday, there were Sandhill Cranes in the field behind our school. Once the kids spotted them, there was no getting them back on task. I hope you enjoy your spring break next week!
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I love when we have a snippet of warm weather. Last week we had a few days in the 70s. Next week is supposed to be the same. It makes me happy.
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I know spring is coming! I know it in my bones!
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What a great poem of contrasts. I love the repetition of what they don't know followed by the shift to HOPE and spring. Yes to spring!
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What a great poem of contrasts. I love the repetition of what they don't know followed by the shift to HOPE and spring. Yes to spring!
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